And now I'm getting the terrible self-doubt.
Parts of the story are great, don't get me wrong. But parts of it simply SUCK. It also needs about 150 pages chopped, judging from the boring bloated middle. I skim through it and think, "OMG, how am I ever going to fix this monstrosity? I'm just a hack!"
(Then my main narrator Dustin says, "No, you're not a hack, so could you please get down to it and put some clothes on me NOW? It's too blooded cold for this, thanks.")
You'd think he'd complain about the dead bodies.









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If death is the answer to love's mysteries,
Then bleed on my darling to the sound of a dream
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Life is good,skateboarding is better!
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